You have made some nice points here and you have managed to analyse parts of the advert well. You have covered terms and plied them to the advert but this is lacking depth and also understanding of some of the terms, e.g., you say it is a realistic narrative "except for the angels falling from the sky" - that sounds anti-realist to me!
I have awarded a pass for this, go through and double check your definitions and add detail where necessary in order to achieve a merit.
Mark,
ReplyDeleteYou have made some nice points here and you have managed to analyse parts of the advert well. You have covered terms and plied them to the advert but this is lacking depth and also understanding of some of the terms, e.g., you say it is a realistic narrative "except for the angels falling from the sky" - that sounds anti-realist to me!
I have awarded a pass for this, go through and double check your definitions and add detail where necessary in order to achieve a merit.
EllieB